Well...
First off, your movie needs a preloader. Second, there were a few spelling errors. Third, there really wasn't anything cool at all about this movie...it's really not even worth watching. Yes, you are setting up an interesting storyline, but you should've added something so that the people will want to watch it. Also, if he's 4 floors below ground, why is there light coming through his cell window? Furthermore, why the hell is the file size so huge for a movie so small? Nobody is going to like a movie that takes that long to download that ends up being a movie full of boring dialog and nothing else. Lastly, I would've given your movie at least some credit, but you really fucked up with one of my pet peeves...you didn't properly credit your audio. "Nobeuo JawaanaMusicmaker" was NOT the artist that made this music. Most likely it was Nobuo Uematsu. You really fucked up there...I was going to give you at least a 1, but now you get a 0.